Yeah...
Amazing work. I really have grown a liking for this series with its simplistic art style and odd humor, and I can't wait for the next one. Keep up the good work.
Yo Fan
Rapterz
Yeah...
Amazing work. I really have grown a liking for this series with its simplistic art style and odd humor, and I can't wait for the next one. Keep up the good work.
Yo Fan
Rapterz
Thanks dude! Glad to have you aboard.
Ha,,,
that was a solid slay!
Yeah ok now I know...
If that is a song from the album "Cuddle Punch" ,which sounds dumb anyways, then I definitely don't want that album.
it was decent...
Although I feel that it is not up to standards of any sort of film festival, but I could be wrong. Really I just thought the script was a tad cheesy as if it were trying to hard to be funny, and the inclusion of swears really messes with the whole Odyssey atmosphere. The animation was a hit and miss. Your characters looked strange, yes the noses were a problem but that's an artistic choice so I have no say in it, but they were blocky which really made this look as if you spent less time than you could on it. Don't get me wrong their was much to like about this, the accuracy with which you describe the events, and mixed with your own brand of parody, really leads me to believe you understand this story well. I want to see where this story goes, I just hope that you address some of the problems that people have explained.
-Rapterz
aight, aight
um...can you please explain where they are, i mean come on you had a giant plot hole...why was there no cannabis?
ehhh....just don't dig ur work dude.
I've watched your other work and now this and I have to say, your desire to imitate anime is really strange ( or you may not be trying I can't tell honestly) but this animation was lame honestly. Your voice work is a shoddy as ever, i mean do you ever check to make sure the volume is correct? Also in comparison to you older work this is drawn much worse...and animated a little more sloppy than I'm use to seeing from you. And yes the script was also pretty dumb, as it had very little realism to it, I mean i went to junior high at one time and i'm here to tell you we didn't act like that. Whatever the case its your series, and maybe your going for something i don't get, and thats cool, a review is an opinion and you may not care what people say, which is also fine, so good luck and i hope this works out for you in the way you want it to.
animation was different...
honestly i liked the animation, it really was unique...but it didn't save the incoherent plot, as to much of it seemed threw together to make a generic story. I honestly had no idea what was going on, even after reading your notes. I'm not trying to bash you, just work on story telling, it really helps.
Yeah, i barely worked on this. It was off and on. And it got really off topic. I decided to post it animation wise.
haha...so bad
i think your song kinda overlapped itself...haha so awful, I mean i crack up by watching this and thinking did this kid really think this would make it, and damn after so many repeats its so funny cuz its just so many beats haha
Consider this!
As a person who grew up watching cartoons such as this, i know what your objective was when submitting this. Lately Madness day has gripped newgrounds with its massive gorefest of flashy death animations, and its good to see a lighthearted animation intended for everyone. I really hope you expand on this universe you have created because it certainly is quite interesting especially with the characters you have obivously painstakingly crafted. I know i'm just one viewer but you have a gift and i would love to see you use it optimally!
Yo friend
Rapterz
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